Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Action plan

Description:The year 6 have been involved in a risk group with the ashurst school teachers.We had to number the most hardest to the least hardest here is my sheet.



Thursday, 15 September 2016

Art portfolio sample

Description:In art we had to create a self portrait of our selfs and then we had to draw and colour our culture and what we like  before that we had to expirement with paint texturing shading blending and we had to create what we are related.




Feedback/Feedforward:I liked that you you tried your best but next time you could do better and finish your art.Juven


Evaluation:I tried my best but i think I need to finish my art because it shouldn't have any white because I was in a hurry to finish my art.

Book Buddies portfolio sample

Description:Book buddies is where we choose a book and read up to a chapter and talk about it.First we had to fill in a sheet about being a fast reader or a slow reader then we had how many pages we would read and how big a book we would read.What type of books we like fiction,non fiction,horror ,family, mystery, adventure and humor. My book buddie is Jacob W and we are reading a book called my friend the enemy it is where a boy named Peter is in the war with the nazi's and and girl named Kim find a German airman and he is hurt so they hide him in the woods and his name is Erik.We are reading a new book called jungle book.

Feedback/Feedforward:I liked how you described it very deeply but next time you need to work on your grammar.Patrick


Evaluation:I think you are right Patrick but I didn't realise that I wasn't  spelling correctly because I was in a rush.




Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Measurement portfolio sample

Description:In Maths we have been learning about measurement.We had a sheet to do we had a first turn and a second turn.We had won some prize money in a fair and we had to see how much money would be the most I chose the 1 litre carton of milk because there would be a lot of money in the 1 litre carton.I was not good the first try but then on the second try I was good at estimating.

Feedback/Feedforward: I think that you have done a great job on this but next time you should spend some more time on it. Max B😑

Evaluation:I think I did a great job and  I should keep on practicing.




Wednesday, 7 September 2016

Writing portfolio sample

Description:In writing we saw a small video about making tennis balls and from that we made a list of things that we saw.We should not write anything about tennis like tennis balls and bats but we should write about something that we see like mould or food.Here is the link for the tennis ball video and my writing on docs.
 
Feedback/Feedforward: instead of a link you can have a picture. I like how you have not waflled. jackw
Evaluation:I think that i dont need to do what you said jack because mine is really good.

Sunday, 4 September 2016

ET Reo portfolio sample

Description:In ET Reo we have been learning about Whakataukis a Whakatauki is a proverb.Our first Whakatauki was He aha te mea nui o te ao? He tangata! He tangata! He tangata!.Wich means what is the most important thing in the world? The people! The people! The people!.We had to draw a person and it could be anybody.Here is my person.
Photo



Feedback/Feedforward: You have learnt a lot about the most important thing in the world.We would not be here or would be a lot different if there was not water. Toby
Evaluation: I didn't finish my picture in time.Toby you are right about if you don't have water you will die.